Wow! Is there a human who has not felt jealousy? What do we do with that? Most of us will not go to the lengths of our narrator for revenge. Many of us will not even want revenge, but the hurt--we can all relate to that.

Very well told, almost like a Greek drama with human flaws determining inexorably the tragic outcome.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @bornben. We appreciate that you encourage and support others with your comments.

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