This is kind of funny, but still, this paragraph

killed and ate most of their volleyball team. A day later, hunters show up for the culprits and kill Uncle Fred cause he was the janitor at the school.”

Does test the limits of our rule on violence.. Do you think you can cleverly tone it down without ruining the humor? Maybe say something like 'made a meal out of the volleyball team. It's a little less graphic, and still funny. If you could do that quickly, we would be able to curate your story.

Thank you!