Hi @adese. Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well. We'd like to call your attention to a word you are using incorrectly, which we also shared in a comment on your last story.

The word is faithful, which means to have faith in God. But the correct word is fateful. This word is related to fate and destiny.

Here are four instances in this story where the word faithful should be changed to fateful:

That faithful evening, I called one of my best friends, Mark, as I couldn't control the excitement I was feeling deep within.

The next faithful day and with so much confidence and expectations, I took a visit to a car dealer shop.

On this faithful Friday, I summon the courage to ask him about the promotion directly.

That faithful evening, I called my best friend Mark.

We also recommend using the word sparingly, such as no more than once in any particular story. It is a word that is typically used at a very impactful moment in a story.

We hope these tips are helpful.