A footprint, indeed. Your story will leave a footprint on readers. Your descriptions are vivid and affecting. Your arc is very good. Henry strikes the right balance between judgement and compassion. We feel sympathy for him and Lisa. In the end, we even feel sympathy for Clara, but are relieved Henry has decided to protect Lisa from her.

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