hello @abdur1. This story needs more development and to be finished. It feels incomplete. There is very little character development and no arc. It is centred on a conflict between a mother and daughter over their individual choice of suitor for the daughter. However, we never learn much about either suitor, and the emotional layers are not explored. We note that you have returned to The ink Well after some time away, and are still not supporting other members of the community in line with our guidelines. Kindly take the time to read our FAQ, rules, and guidelines, and ensure that you are adhering to them if you wish to continue writing in The Ink Well and for the community to take the time to read your submissions. This means, among other things: Ensure that you are meeting minimum length requirements, that your stories are developed and have a clear arc, that you have used correct grammar and punctuation, including writing dialogue with speech marks, that you are supporting at least two other writers in the community by commenting meaningful on their stories, each time you wish to submit a story of your own. there are other guidelines which you should familiarise yourself with if you are serious about writing short stories.