Then the utmost curiosity as I saw the people called Life.
Who would have thought that it would cost so much to be a living soul?
I couldn't have believed if I was told.

I don't know much of what you've seen in your journey of life but what you've written here is true fact of what we encounter in our daily lives as humans.
If I'm to give a title to this work of poetry I'll call it trust.
It cost alot of our trust to live daily, existing among friends and foes. Sometimes friends turn foes and sometimes foes turn friends. It's all a transfer of trust. And really, living comes with alot of uncertainties, and at certain points in our lives we learn to both live and deal with situations as they present to us. But in all it cost much to be a living soul.
Great write up sir 👍