Thank you.

Thanks for passing by.

It's a rare story. It's a hard debt to pay and it's harder to say "I'm not paying" to a drug lord. In the end I didn't understand if the disciple should support the godfather. Congratulations

Gracias por la mención y gracias por el apoyo.

Interesting story. I don't know much about clanes in Africa but your story teach us how difficult it must be there for young people to accept distance and separation because of culture. I guess the two

A wonderful love story masterfully embellished. A happy ending worthy of a movie. Congratulations.

It was so easy to solve their conflict. Why she didn't ask that before? Another thing that left me thinking for a while was the old man telling the woman to forgive her husband, without him knowing what

Interesting description, although I laughed at the end with the reality of the protagonist, because it was all a dream. Well done. Keep on dreaming.

A weakness can be converted to a strength. Good lesson. Well written. Congratulations. I had some fun with your story. The real Okayo may look like this: Real Okayo Greetings!

Nothing missing. Keep up the good work,

So the girl was the brave one, but not so brave to face her mother with the truth. That was the funny side of the story. Good story. Congratulations.

I could feel in the place, so the setting is ok. (I'm just starting to read, here in theinkwell, some writing concepts). The dialogs seem also ok. Good story.

NOTIFY

STOP

STOP

Thank you very much.

Thank you.

Thanks for your comment. Thanks for the exception of allowing, this time, the "low level" violence in this story. I promise to avoid it in the future. Your comment makes me feel like I belong

Me encanta cómo escribes. Se me ocurre que un gallo en una oficina también puede ser un tono de celular, ahorita los hay de todo tipo. No era tu caso. Igual es mejor no andar metiendo códigos que le piden

Gracias, amiga, por invitarme a este maravilloso concurso. Aunque no soy muy buena escribiendo humor, agrego mi participación → Restaurante de Lujo.