I like it! I like the story, how subtle the emotional built up is presented as we see Lois' background, I like to see how she finally breaks. She wears that cynic face to mask her scars and her unfulfilled dream of having a loving family with children. I feel sorry for Lois, but I am sure she would throw everyone's pity in the trashcan as she is too proud to let others see that she remains a fragile hurt woman inside. So many people do it everyday for their own personal reasons.
That was a great piece! 🌼
Take care!