RE: RE: Modern lovers
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RE: Modern lovers

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Hah, you got me good with this one, fantastic end!

I also loved the way you presented the dialogue. It's hard work making dialogue work without exposition and let it carry the story. Well done, I enjoyed it a lot and the revelation at the end!

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