This was an enjoyable little tale. I really like tales about animal's and their spirits.
What I noticed is that you have some grammar errors. I think a second round of editing or free tools like Grammarly can truly help with that. I don't mean to be mean in any way, but since my writing used to suffer from similar problems, I can't help but point them out.
I really hope you keep writing and I'd like to hear more stories from you!