RE: RE: If He Is Mine
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RE: If He Is Mine

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I liked the magic that your story has, that combination between dreams and reality...
I loved this sentence "A shaggy-satiated bumblebee, was sleeping in a deep sleep in the flowers".
I got lost a little bit because I didn't know if the end of the story was dream or reality, I don't know if it's because of the translation I do into Spanish or you did it that way to leave it to the reader's imagination.

Greetings rayt2@rayt2 ☘😊

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