thank you very much for your welcome. yes, it was a mistake to change the p.o.v. the guy with the hoodie was the same guy who ran passed him in the beginning of my piece. They were in the same car, he jumps, anyway that was the idea behind it when i wrote it or they could be following her and the accident was somehow because of the man in the hoodie.
Thanks for your notes.
I will, thank you for reading.