Welcome again and compliments for your clear writing style. Reading you was a pleasure. You changed the unusual present tense of the first part and - notwithstanding we try to harmonize together the first half with the second - I believe that the story benefitted from this. The guy with the hoodie.. Was he sent by Ally? It's also interesting the counterposition between Amanda's pregnancy and him becoming a hope for a pro-abortion organization. Keep the pen running with us!