Steemit Open Mic Week 110 - Promesas - Original Song.

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Hello Steemit!

Well , here I have a quite late Open Mic entry , I had this song idea pop up to me yesterday and I really wanted to get it out of my system.. sometimes it's a necessity hahahaha...

So , it's in a very early stage and I did a little raw production around it but i think it kind of works .. this one will get filed until I find a home for it but I wanted to share it a little with the openmic@openmic family! luzcypher@luzcypher, hope you are having fun over at SteemFest!

So , I hope you like it!

''Promesas''
(P. Mena)

Día cambiá de color
sin buscarlo, encontró
el papel en donde
estas plumas escribieron

Las promesas para dos
que en una caja se olvidò
Que se sientan a lo largo
de esta vieja mesa

Y Se le escapa en un avión

Y volverá a la sala
que lleva sus mañanas
que es testigo de la historia
que hay en su ventana

Y Abrazará la nada
Dirá que todo cambia
serán las notas
las que viven
lo que se fue en un avión

Here is a translation

''Promises''
(P. Mena)

The day changed color
without looking, he found
the paper where
these pens once wrote

The promises for two
that in a box they forgot
That sit across
this old table

And it escapes in an airplane

And he returns to the room
that carries his mornings
and is a witness to the stories
that are in his window

And he embraces nothingness
says that everything changes
will these notes
be the one that live
those things that left on an airplane

(the translation is very hard on this one , the spanish song never specifies gender and some metaphors are lost.. oh well hahaha )

Thanks for listening!

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