The Girl on the Third Floor

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I wasn’t looking for love.

I just wanted peace.

Lagos had shown me pepper — landlords, traffic, and that one roommate who borrowed my boxers without asking.

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So when I got the chance to move into a self-contained apartment in Shomolu, I jumped.

Third floor. No generator. And I had to climb with my bucket like Moses on the mountain. But peace is peace, abi?

​

That’s when I met her.

​

She wasn’t loud.

She wasn’t flashy.

She had that quiet kind of beauty that makes your brain restart.

​

The first day, I saw her by the tap.

She said, “Hi.” I said, “Hey.”

She smiled.

Me? I died and resurrected on the spot.

​

From that day, I timed her movements like a man studying for JAMB.

If she went downstairs at 7:03 am to sweep, I went out by 7:04 am to “stretch my legs.”

When she carried buckets, I offered help — even when I had my own back pain.

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Let me confess:

She didn’t know my name for the first two weeks.

She just called me “Neighbour.”

​

But I didn’t mind.

Love starts small.

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One Sunday evening, while washing my boxers and dreaming about a better life, I heard a knock.

​

It was her.

​

She stood at the door with her laptop.

"Please, my Zoom meeting isn’t connecting. I think it’s my Wi-Fi. Can I use yours?”

​

I nearly told her, “Take the whole router.”

But I just nodded and said, “Sure, come in.”

​

She entered. Sat down. Logged in.

​

I was pretending to scroll Twitter, but my mind was doing backflips.

Her perfume. Her laughter. The way she said, “Abeg, network dey craze.”

​

Then it happened.

​

She leaned in to show me something on her screen.

​

And paused.

​

She blinked.

​

Then coughed.

​

Then smiled awkwardly.

​

Then asked — very gently —

“Did you… eat something?”

​

I panicked.

​

I hadn’t eaten.

​

But I had taken garri earlier…

with fried fish…

and forgotten to brush since morning.

​

She excused herself two minutes later.

Said, “Let me go check something downstairs.”

​

She didn’t come back.

​

I sat there.

Ashamed.

Defeated.

​

My crush left my apartment…

because my breath ambushed her from the side.

​

That night, I bought Close-Up Deep Action like it was antibiotics.

Used it like anointing oil. Brushed like a man seeking redemption.

​

Three days later, I saw her again.

​

She smiled.

​

I smiled.

​

She said,

“You’re glowing o. Did you fall in love or change your toothpaste?”

​

I said,

“Both.”

​

She laughed.

This time… she stayed longer.

I wasn’t looking for love.

I just wanted peace.

Lagos had shown me pepper — landlords, traffic, and that one roommate who borrowed my boxers without asking.

​

So when I got the chance to move into a self-contained apartment in Shomolu, I jumped.

Third floor. No generator. And I had to climb with my bucket like Moses on the mountain. But peace is peace, abi?

​

That’s when I met her.

​

She wasn’t loud.

She wasn’t flashy.

She had that quiet kind of beauty that makes your brain restart.

​

The first day, I saw her by the tap.

She said, “Hi.” I said, “Hey.”

She smiled.

Me? I died and resurrected on the spot.

​

From that day, I timed her movements like a man studying for JAMB.

If she went downstairs at 7:03 am to sweep, I went out by 7:04 am to “stretch my legs.”

When she carried buckets, I offered help — even when I had my own back pain.

​

Let me confess:

She didn’t know my name for the first two weeks.

She just called me “Neighbour.”

​

But I didn’t mind.

Love starts small.

​

One Sunday evening, while washing my boxers and dreaming about a better life, I heard a knock.

​

It was her.

​

She stood at the door with her laptop.

"Please, my Zoom meeting isn’t connecting. I think it’s my Wi-Fi. Can I use yours?”

​

I nearly told her, “Take the whole router.”

But I just nodded and said, “Sure, come in.”

​

She entered. Sat down. Logged in.

​

I was pretending to scroll Twitter, but my mind was doing backflips.

Her perfume. Her laughter. The way she said, “Abeg, network dey craze.”

​

Then it happened.

​

She leaned in to show me something on her screen.

​

And paused.

​

She blinked.

​

Then coughed.

​

Then smiled awkwardly.

​

Then asked — very gently —

“Did you… eat something?”

​

I panicked.

​

I hadn’t eaten.

​

But I had taken garri earlier…

with fried fish…

and forgotten to brush since morning.

​

She excused herself two minutes later.

Said, “Let me go check something downstairs.”

​

She didn’t come back.

​

I sat there.

Ashamed.

Defeated.

​

My crush left my apartment…

because my breath ambushed her from the side.

​

That night, I bought Close-Up Deep Action like it was antibiotics.

Used it like anointing oil. Brushed like a man seeking redemption.

​

Three days later, I saw her again.

​

She smiled.

​

I smiled.

​

She said,

“You’re glowing o. Did you fall in love or change your toothpaste?”

​

I said,

“Both.”

​

She laughed.

This time… she stayed longer.

Don't let mouth odour remove you from your destiny.

Close-Up: Because your breath shouldn’t have a plot twist

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