So this is a little story that Ive been working on in my free time. Was looking for some honest opinions, so I came here. Please critique me as necessary. Read away!
Chapter 1: Its bright. Overwhelmingly bright. I try to open my eyes, but it burns at first. I’m lying down in a bed, but I don't know where I am. Theres a lamp next to me and a tv on the wall across from