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The initial sightings of the eyes watching through the mirror created a growing sense of unease and mystery. Having Eliana's friend Daniela also see the eyes made the experience seem real, not just Eliana's imagination. The scene where Eliana's hand goes through the mirror and the girls get pulled into the other realm was intense and frightening.
RE: Passageway at the Dance Academy/The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #129