Satoru Gojo, welcome to The Ink Well. It's an honor to have you here. I'm a fan. (I hope to see you in the third season of JJk.)

The story you shared is sensational. You definitely have potential. One piece of advice that might be useful is to separate some paragraphs. Every 5 or 7 lines would be ideal so that the text doesn't look like hyperbole.

But anyway, you're a great sorcerer, so I wish you a Merry Christmas.