Good evening steemians.
This is a new try for me , I did poetry before but first time I'm sharing it on a platform, please give me remarks. I hope I'm not too bad at it!
The first poet works I've read on steemit since I joined is 
Again and again
The shouting's pierce my soul
Why can't I cry ?
I've become a robot.
Emotions, thunder
Destroy my world
Hold me up
Only to shatter my soul.
Break me in!
Break me out!
Give up, just let me leave.
Ain't ur love supposed to be the eternal kind?
Ur blood runs in me , yet I don't feel it's pulse .
I'm emotionless to ur touch.
And I feel it's time we just depart.
