What really impresses me about your writing is that in a seemingly simple and entertaining story, in a roundabout way, you're managed to describe not only the plot line but also almost exhaustive information about your upbringing, the social standing of your family, and even your overall philosophy of intersexual relationship.

Another important moment is the purely English semantic pattern of your narrative, something I need to learn for in my own writing I am struggling with this model.

Great job!