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Good structure, the prompts development, and a humorous ending. ))) One thing that made me wonder was the fact of you choose a remote, relative to the action, vantage point. It felt like I was reading

Ah... got it. It's interesting how many nuances come about once you try to think through the boundary conditions given by the prompt. Cheers!

No. LOL I write in English, to begin with. The English semantics, grammar, and Social reality are so different that it would be difficult to paint the Western background in Russian. But my English itself

Thank you! Glad you liked it. Sure thing. I try to read the prompt carefully and if possible hit all the clues in there. :) My first language is Russian.

Thank you!

A nice read! Good game mechanics. Some interesting psychological dynamics on display with all the progressive checkmarks carefully crafted in and a perfect mellow ending! I left with a couple of questions

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

A nice development, friend! I liked how you worked in the idea of cheating and switching the backpacks. Only I didn't understand what exactly happened. It's clear that both mothers decided to teach the

Thank you for such an attentive reading! This story went a little weird. But once I started I decided just to go along with it. About the stamping on the stairs. To me, it was the question of who made

Thank you! Now, I will tuck it away. :)

Ah... Thank you! I knew what "tucked away" means, but I was only aware of its literal meaning. Cool!

An interesting development although it ends anticlimactically. I was curious why the intruder was so adamant to enter the apartment. Maybe it was a previous tenant that left something in the underfloor

I liked the fluency of your narrative all nicely animated and all. Although I got kind of confused in some expressions. For example this one... and tucked away his mom’s voice before she left. Reminds

Welcome! More people - more fun.

Hi Ladies! I wonder if I am right about that. To me, this is a very sweet story and I think if I were a woman it would make me cry, but it would be not a cry of fright or horror, but a cry of light sentimental

This is such a sweet story! If I were a woman it would make me cry :) I loved the ending that came out so natural. Great job!

No problem! Now that's you clarified it. It's all cool! :)

Thank you! I am yet to read everybody else's entries. BTW congrats on you win last time!