RE: RE: The Streetlight (We-Write #11)
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RE: The Streetlight (We-Write #11)

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I liked the fluency of your narrative all nicely animated and all. Although I got kind of confused in some expressions. For example this one...

and tucked away his mom’s voice before she left.

Reminds me Beatles song, Elenor Rigby

wearing the face that he kept in the jar by the door

Cheers!

@mgaft1: I liked the fluency | Ecency