This is wonderfully descriptive. Even without the image, I felt like I was part of the scene. It was simple - from the start you built the importance of the wallet alongside the chaos of the market. I could picture myself in the situation having consciously touched my wallet ( and phone) in the crowded markets and trains in Bombay. And I also lost mine, and had people give me the same advise - next time, be more careful. Overall, I loved that it was short, succinct and full of action - very difficult to achieve :)