This my entry Commented on; @katleya @marriot5464

I love the way you're interpretation of the story well done

I fell in love with this story from the first paragraph beautifully written

Good luck on hive

It is rather unfortunate that some people don't understand the feelings of others and how it affects them accept my condolences

Your story is beautifully presented

This story was well written with good character development

amazing plot it is a clear reflection of the fragility of bonds

This is a rather touching poem if I do say so myself and I believe it should garner more attention in other communities

the crystallization of ayana dreams show not to give up on goals. interesting story

tHIS STORY IS SIMPLY CAPTIVATING WITH SOLID EMOTIONS BEING DISPLAYED

BEAUTIFUL STORY i ESPECIALLY LOVE THE DETAILS ON IT

very interesting piece with vivid emotions

Thanks I would try to improve

this story brings a lot to my imagination very well done

the attention to detail as you take us through the desert is beautiful and well crafted

Thank you very much for understanding

Everyone needs support to survive in the society thanks for reading

your attention to detail and plot is well planned, especially the cyberpunk theme i had a blast reading it

beautifully written