RE: RE: Poem: Debt and Illness
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RE: Poem: Debt and Illness

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Hello! Nice to meet you!

Awesome! You've managed to get your message across very well so!

That's very impressive - your English is really good! There is nothing about the poem that would make me think it wasn't written by a native speaker actually - perhaps I'd change the word 'makes' in the last sentence to 'sets' - sets us free flows nicer than makes us free.

Keep up the great work and you'll master English in no time!

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