Great story!I really like it from "Lambert raised an eyebrow at the investigator"...

The intro bit was good for context, but its needed something more to it....like where it was set..

I was thinking more like this has some fantastic possibility of a blade runner style movie -- like set in the future where just a very small set of people evolve a little and people have much stronger intuition over psychic today.

Then the picture could be like a flying car or something...haha sorry overactive imagination.