Hey there. I am coming back to you at 54% of the way through your book, Half Past The Moonfall and I gotta say this is one great story. I love the style of writing. It is totally not my normal read, aside from elves and magic, but I fucking LOVE this so far. Half the time I have the same grins on my face that you describe Nessie having. I just reached a big reveal around 50% in and am totally hooked. I look forward to reading the rest of the novel.

I just came across the repeated paragraph lol. I don't have dyslexia, but when I read I will accidentally read the same paragraph two or three times before realizing it, so I had to actually go back and read it a fourth time to make sure it was an error! I have noticed a good half dozen other errors in the book, and while I am not an editor, nor do I have any literature editing specialties, it would be an honour if you allowed me a chance to edit Half Past The Moonfall. I think this is a great story and you are a wonderful author and I want to help you if possible. Just let me know the best way to contact you if you wish to pursue this.

Also, I have a question about purchasing your book. I assume Kobo takes a larger cut than Smashwords, but would a purchase on Kobo be better for your brand? And is there anywhere in particular you would like me to leave reviews?