Oooooh!! Hopefully you like it and it's not too horrible. 😅
That's true about revisions and learning. The main thing I learnt from Moonfall is that I can write through tears and that for some unfathomable reason people seem to like distinctly Australian things. There's a bit of slang in there! Soon you'll be fluent in Aussie. 😆
Just realised I also need to edit the Dear Reader and make it say Hive instead of Steem, sigh. 😒
ETA: If you bought it from Smashwords yesterday (I had 2 "sales"; assuming one was you!) a freshly edited version will be up within the next 24 hours -- it changes Steem to Hive in the Dear Reader and removes a repeated paragraph I somehow missed mid-book. Nothing story-ruining. But, just letting you know!
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