Thank you for your reply. You are right, the word "Conclusion" does not necessarily need to be used to express your verdict, however, it does make it easy for your readers to understand the content. As a writer, you need to be concerned about your readers/viewers.

What is missing on your post is that you did not really express your opinion. Yes, it is an analysis of an investment, I was hoping to learn your personal view on this issue or subject topic, what you like and dont, how you think that the situation could be improved or solved totally. That is what make a better review. You write very decently and as I suggested, improving your post structure will help you make a better review post

By the way, the downvote on your post has been retracted. I hope this clear now.

Cheers.