This is a really cool story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how this continues into part 2!

It has a whimsical feeling too it, and at first I thought it was going to be a dream, but then she woke up as she reached the city, so I suppose that checks that idea off the list !LOLZ

I'm in the process of writing my part 1 entry to this colaboration contest; it's a lot of fun and a great idea to team writers up to work on one story.

!PIZZA !LUV