Wow! What a captivating and thought-provoking story! Turns out it was all a dream and yet a message from the unseen world for Jack to amend his ways.

I was appalled by Uncle Jack's behaviour to Anne and all the excuses he gave to the big fish, toad and water spider. In all honesty, he's a reflection of some of us. I very much enjoyed the conversation Jack had with these wise underwater characters.

Bravo! I love your story! Looking forward to reading more. 🙂