Oh, It is just your haiku which reminds me of this famous Ci written by Li Qingzhao in Song dynasty. I feel they both describe the sunset's beauty and movement. The only difference is that yours pays more attention to the music of the sunset, whereas hers cares about the color. 这落日溶金的天空是如此美好，恰如禅似的慢板行云流水。通感之美！

Ci/词 is a kind of ancient Chinese poem which can be used for singing as lyrics to the special tune.

I'm so happy that I unexpectedly introduced you an ancient Chinese poetess via your own haiku! Thank you for writing so wonderful haiku to us! You see, the great literature between the east and the west can be interlinked, in spite of different language and style.

However, it is rather difficult for me to enjoy your new haiku: the birth of starlight. Since I'm completely ignorant about astronomy, I read it again and again and check the information about supernova, etc. It turns out that it is true that the starlight we perceive may be from millions of years ago. It is so unbelievable and incredible! It seems that I become enlightened to the meaning of Sabi in haiku. (I guess there is no Sabi in traditional Chinese culture.) Thank you for leading me up to a new level on haiku- enjoying! Thank you, teacher!