Words
59
Reading
1 min
5y
I loved the story
I walked through and pictured the sisters doing their thing, their children and grandchildren "watered down" over time ;p
But I have to know now who are they? What's their lineage... what's the story these two men have .....
I like the way you tell your story, you gave me details about them without overexplainingng:D
RE: The Inkwell Short Story Competition. First Draft . Identity Crossroad