RE: RE: The Inkwell Short Story Competition. First Draft . Identity Crossroad
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RE: The Inkwell Short Story Competition. First Draft . Identity Crossroad

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I loved the story
I walked through and pictured the sisters doing their thing, their children and grandchildren "watered down" over time ;p

But I have to know now who are they? What's their lineage... what's the story these two men have .....

I like the way you tell your story, you gave me details about them without overexplainingng:D

@kaerpediem: I loved the story | Ecency