Hello @ubani1 It was a good read for your story, I feel. The title itself lead me to believe something eerie was going to happen to your character, Henry, if no mention of a family business in funeral home service industry.

I must say your story had all the elements of a timid person who's subject to bullies and their tactics. I knew it was only a matter of course that the 3 individuals would take their antics to the next level. So happy that it worked out where Henry was not seriously hurt. His quick thinking to tell his friend to make sure to call for help was an added clue that your character may have been shy, but was smart.

I pecked Sandra and whispered into her ear. "Call the police if i'm not back soon."

Placing Henry in a coffin was extremely cruel on the part of the bullies. Maybe if the story continues, we'll get to see if they get their just desserts for all their bullying tactics. Maybe the tables with turn on them.

Thanks so much for sharing your story. Have a good week ahead.