Hello @b0s. I liked your story about loneliness and how it affects someone. After a while though, people begin to crave that which they try to keep at bay. I like how the story line flows in the development of the loneliness relationship. What I was thinking was that some other explanation for her being there would surface as through the lady was only a figment of his imagination. The cue that I took this from was the ending line, "I'll always come to you." That signified to me that she was only appearing to help ease his loneliness.

Thanks so much for sharing your story.

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