What an interesting story, @yuki-nee. I don't read a lot of fantasy stories, so I'm not sure if some of the terms are ones you came up with or if they appear elsewhere in literature. I know what a magus is, of course. But I was curious about "revealers."

I was also wondering if the narrator of the story is truly the good one, or if it's possible the Revealer is the good one, as he wants to share magic with the world!

I enjoyed the story.