This is a great story, @wrestlingdesires. So imaginative!

I really want to commend you on the dialogue. You have truly mastered this! It's not easy to do. And we all have habits that sneak into our writing, whether or not they support the flow of a story. I'm absolutely amazed at how you pulled this off. The dialogue tags are minimized. They are only there to support the flow, help us keep track of who is speaking, and keep the story flowing. Absolutely fantastic!