RE: RE: When the Bright Star Burned Out | Fiction
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RE: When the Bright Star Burned Out | Fiction

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I love this story, viceroyklayd@viceroyklayd. It's beautifully told, and heartbreaking. So many kids feel the pressure of their parents to perform. In this case, the boy is clearly brilliant, and can do anything with his life that he chooses, whether or not he meets his parents expectations. The story arc was very good, and the character development is excellent. What a wonderful ending, when the mother comes to understand the role she is playing in his unhappiness.

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@jayna: I love this story, | Ecency