Hi @unyime1, and thank you for contributing your story to The Ink Well Challenge!

I hope you are open to some feedback on your story. At The Ink Well, we are doing our best encourage our writers to improve their skills. We are also looking for the best content to reward.

My suggestions are:

1. Consider writing your stories first in Google docs. It will highlight any grammatical errors so you can fix them.
2. Be sure to read your stories before submitting them. If you take the time to do that, you will easily see many of the problems. For example, one of the quotes has quotation marks at the beginning, but not at the end.
3. Make sure you provide credits for your image sources. Whether you took the pictures yourself, or you found the images on a license-free site like Pixabay or Unsplash, it's important to let your readers know that you have done proper sourcing.

Thanks and I hope this feedback is helpful!