Wow, what an intense story, @ubani. It's great that he has a second chance at life in the end!

Do you use Google Docs to draft your stories? I'm sure we have recommended it to you before. It's a great way to find and fix errors in your story. (You can read about it here). Here's a sentence that is a bit confusing because I think some of the words are not right.

Manipulation and deceit, but I had to live like that in other to be at peace with my worldly friends even though many peaches against such act.

I think you mean "in order to be at peace" in the first italicized phrase. And I'm not sure about the second one. The word "peaches" is a type of fruit. Maybe you meant "preaches"?

I hope those suggestions are helpful! Great story!