Great story, @ubani1. It's interesting that his family kept the secret from him for so long. Now I wonder what it will be like for him to see the Lorenzo girl at school. It could end up being an interesting spin on Romeo and Juliet or West Side Story!

I'm really impressed with your storytelling and how far your writing has come. It's wonderful to see. I hope you're enjoying the journey! One thing I thought I would mention is that some of your sentences are missing punctuation. It's a good idea to do one final edit before you publish so you look for those things. :-)