I really enjoyed this story, and how Dubby's dream finally came true. Great storytelling, @sativa001.
It looks like you're just getting starting on Hive! One of the best recommendations I can make is to get involved in communities where you find like-minded people. Read the other member's work and leave comments for them. It's a great way to get involved, and of course you earn on Hive for commenting as well as for posting.
Here are some additional resources to help you find your way around the Hive platform.
Be sure to get acquainted with @theterminal. It's one of the best sources of information on the Hive platform. They also have a Discord server and they are great at answering questions.
See the newbie's guide: @newbies-guide. Here's a collection of their posts on formatting: @newbies-guide/hive-writing-and-formatting-tips
Also be sure to check out @heyhaveyamet. They are devoted to introducing new members.
RE: Deep.