There are so many delightful lines and poignant moments in this story, @samsmith1971. I actually had to read it in stints, due to household interruptions, and each time I went back to a few paragraphs before to make sure I didn't miss anything or lose the continuity. You have a lovely writing voice, and such wonderful sensibilities. The story is rich with meaning and full of surprises. And the ending is perfect. I wouldn't change a thing!