RE: RE: Fiction: A new hope (Una nueva esperanza) [EN/ES]
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RE: Fiction: A new hope (Una nueva esperanza) [EN/ES]

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Yes, I know the translation tools have some limitations, and it's unfortunate. One of the differences between our two languages is how we use pronouns, and I understand it can be troublesome! I certainly could not write in Spanish. 😄

My comment was to encourage you to add at least a brief description of your characters, so we can visualize them. It can be as simple as something like the following examples:

  • Hamulet tucked her sword into its scabbard with a swish. Her eyes flashed.
  • Hamulet's blood-red lips broke into an angry smirk and she spoke in a tense whisper.

Something very simple like that can help readers to know your character. And the more we know the characters, the more involved we become in the story.

@jayna: Yes, I know the | Ecency