Hi @pjpavan. Your story appears to be fiction. You are not 80 years old, right?? 😄

But you didn't use the #fiction or #creativenonfiction tags. And the story style is written like a personal creative nonfiction story, which does not have a plot or a "story arc." So it's a bit confusing!

You'll want to distinguish your stories with one of those tags. And when writing fiction, it's important to have a conflict of some kind, which is resolved by the end of the story. That forms the "story arc" which is a key element of fiction. You can read about the importance of conflict and story arcs in the "Writing Basics" section of our catalog of fiction writing tips.

Also, you'll want to correct the spelling of football, as you have written it several times with the spelling "futboll." (Evidently that is the correct spelling in Albania, though.)

I hope you don't mind some helpful feedback!