This is such an imaginative fantasy story, @miles101 and @sonofremi. You did a great job of creating a kind of epic journey, with lots of twists and turns that build tension and create a splendid story arc, culminating in the den of the monster. I was wondering how she could possibly get back to Calvin with the antidote in time. Riding the monster was a great resolution. And in the process of this entire story playing out, she found people like her, which also enriched the story nicely.

Well done! That's really neat that you have collaborated on the story!