RE: RE: Splash - Something a bit surreal.
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RE: Splash - Something a bit surreal.

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I can tell you had fun with this one, lordtimoty@lordtimoty! I like your clever re-use of the words "curious" and "splash," as well as the allusions to various stories and songs. Now I'm singing that Springsteen song! (Alternating with White Rabbit by Jefferson Airplane.)

There's one little fix you might want to make. The word "run" should be in past tense:

She run to the window and jumped through it.

Thanks for sharing this entertaining story in The Ink Well!

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