Great character building, @lordtimoty!

One of the best moments in this story was the first line of the second paragraph, which was so startling that it made me sit up in my chair.

But, despite her enchanting quips and her cleverly crafted sexual innuendo at the golf club, she was at her core, a fraud.

This lures the reader in. We need to know how and why she's a fraud, and what's going to happen. This is such a clever device. And you don't divulge anything right away. We are propelled forward to continue reading and find out!

I liked the ending, and how she realizes she can finally let down her guard now that there is no secret to be kept.