Wow, you had my heart racing, @kirlos. That was not what I was expecting at all. I couldn't believe the narrator got out of the tent. I was certain it was going to be some creepy stalker, but not a creepy demon with fangs! What a relief when she (or he?) got back to the car and drove away.

I would have loved to know the narrator's name and whether it is a male or female.

Nice work! Keep writing.