RE: RE: THE TRIALS AND TEMPTATIONS OF BAYO
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RE: THE TRIALS AND TEMPTATIONS OF BAYO

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Bayo had some tough decisions all around. He made the right choice and was rewarded for it! Nice story, kingkenny44@kingkenny44.

I have a suggested edit for you. "Bids of sweat" should be "beads of sweat." 🙂

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